RP post style inquiry

In my recently added RP post, I included quite a few meta-references, like calling the pirates “underleveled” or recalling STV ganking. To me personally, it came without a second thought because it was the way I roleplayed on Twitter for a while, and it was generally my recognized style. However, I started having some doubts now. Perhaps a longer storyline like this should be more immersive and avoid these references to gameplay systems, unless it’s absolutely necessary to spoof it for humor value. I thought, hey, why don’t I ask you what do you prefer?

This poll is actually more important for me than random opinions as before, so please give me your feedback.